A number of articles from
BYU Studies 59/2 (2020) has been put online (I am sure the rest of the articles will be posted later). They deal with the First Vision. I have the entire issue, and it is packed full of scholarly articles exaining the First Vision from various perspectives. So, if you want a good work on the First Vision, be sure to check out the articles in this issue; if you want the opposite, maybe something by
a certain Protesant apologist who is the embodiment of the Dunning-Kruger effect.