Stanford Carmack has responded to some comments by another LDS scholar, Philip Barlow (author of the book, Mormons and the Bible: The Place of the Latter-day Saints in American Religion [Oxford], which I highly recommend) on the topic of the language of the Book of Mormon as part of an article for vol. 27 of Interpreter: A Journal of Mormon Scripture:
Barlow on Book of Mormon Language: An Examination of Some Strained Grammar (PDF)
Barlow on Book of Mormon Language: An Examination of Some Strained Grammar (PDF)